Sounds fabulous Marsha!
I wrote an article explaining why infant formula makes infants more 
vulnerable to diarrhoea in emergencies in which I attempted to break down 
the process into small pieces so that it could be understood by someone 
without any background in the area (but there is still so much unavoidable 
jargon!). Perhaps some of it might be useful to you in your rewrite. 
http://www.ennonline.net/ife/view.aspx?resid=101
Karleen Gribble
Australia

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> OK Morgan and Lactnet, here is the challenge. If someone more creative 
> than I would like to try to make this concept reader-friendly at a lower 
> reading level and add drawings I think that would be a great idea. We can 
> all put our names on it and get it out to where it can do some good! I 
> cannot draw stick figures but think illustrations are a wonderful idea. A 
> one page illustrated handout in any number of languages to be shared and 
> used is really what we are all about. Does anyone feel up to trying this? 
> I am happy to work with you and post it somewhere so that we can all see 
> it and when it is ready you can all download it. How about it?
>
> Marsha Walker, RN, IBCLC
> Weston, MA
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