Robert Peters wrote:
>The second stanza: ...
>
>(He should have noticed it earlier, the sign put up on the house, so he
>would have never wanted to look for a faithful woman.)
To be more accurate, the translation ought be "so he never would have wanted
to look 'in the house' (im haus) for a faithful woman."
>Stanza three: ...
>
>(The wind plays indoors with the hearts as on the roof, but not so loudly.
>What do they bother about my grief? Their child is a rich bride.)
>
>Again he sees himself as the poor victim, left alone, treated utterly
>wrong. No one asks for his grief (the German word "Schmerzen" literally
>means bodily pain).
Since "schmerzen" is plural, wouldn't it better translated as "hurts"?
(Also gives you assonance with "hearts")
John Dalmas
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